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Sonnet 37

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you went away and left alone my love
and i dont wanna shed for you these tears,
why not instead i free for you a dove
to watch fly away my innocent years.
though every time, when i see your face
i cannot forget, from you, all my pain,
and i guess, to you, it's all just a race
but i just wanna kiss you in the rain.
you never got to know me at my worst
but even my best was not good enough.
ill never be able to quench your thirst
for she is, for you, far more than enough.

yet you still have all the love in my heart
even though all you want is to be 'part.
learning about Skakepeare in english could be helpful to my writing skills.
but i still dont really like this ...

April2011
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Mistique7's avatar
I like it :>
Just try not to repeat words too much, especially at the end of a phrase (such as 'enough' in the last few lines :>)